Over the holidays, my Twitter feed and favorite news sites were filled with articles about Making a Murderer, the new Netflix series literally taking the country by storm. Curious, I decided to check it out, too. I made it through the third episode before my feelings of anger and disgust set in, and I just couldn’t bring myself to continue watching more.
To be honest, I’m not a big fan of crime stories, though I sometimes read about them in the news. I shy away from shows like Dexter and CSI because I find them creepy. I tried listening to Serial last year, since I’m a big This American Life fan, but I just found it uncompelling. And as I watched those first episodes of Making A Murderer, I became aware of a theme, something I first noticed in Serial.
What about the victims, I kept thinking; where are their stories?
Both Serial and Making a Murderer focus on the violent deaths of two young women, and the Netflix series also covers a brutal sexual assault in which the victim fought her attacker and survived. The details of each crime are excruciating to hear, and because both stories cover the subsequent trials and imprisonment of the accused, the cases are meticulously poured over for our understanding and our entertainment. But Serial and Making a Murderer share a common characteristic that we easily forget. They are real cases, with real crimes committed against real victims. And in both of these instances, real lives were ended.
The stories are definitely interesting and relevant, and have always held a place of interest for newspaper readers and television viewers alike. In the wake of recent police shootings of black men and women and the rise of the Black Lives Matter movement, corruption within law enforcement and local government is on the minds of many. Both Serial and Making a Murderer examine the obviously botched murder investigations and unfair trials of the accused, shedding light on the many flaws of our criminal justice system. It’s a fair discussion to have, and Chitra Ramaswamy’s recent article in The Guardian suggests that Making A Murderer marks the shift of the true-crime genre into “mainstream and even highbrow culture.”
As the investigation into these crimes and unfair trials play out, the focus shifts from the victims of the attacks to the alleged perpetrators, and the women who were killed at the hands of angry men fall into the background. That’s what bothers me.
Ann Brocklehurst, a journalist and private investigator, calls these shows “Injustice Porn” in her recent blog post about the topic. She notices the interesting dichotomy that these crimes were committed against women by men, yet women are also the creators of Serial and Making a Murderer, which portray the accused as victims of law enforcement and the justice system. The goal of these programs is to shed light on the men’s stories, to educate the public about the wrongs of our nation’s legal system, and also, to entertain us. In the process, the language and techniques used to explain the men’s experiences often downplay or even insult the victims.
The popularity of Making a Murderer is so immense that it’s become a national phenomenon, requiring a response from the White House after a recent petition to free the accused garnered hundreds of thousands of signatures and continues to grow. Everyone wants a piece of the story, and half-baked, click-bait posts like Slate’s recent article by Leon Neyfakh on Penny Beerntsen, the sexual assault victim featured in Making a Murderer, only add to the problem. Neyfakh titled the piece, “What It Feels Like to Send an Innocent Person to Prison for 18 Years,” effectively placing blame upon the victim’s shoulders, when in reality, she was led astray purposely by inept and corrupt law enforcement. The actual URL for this story even contains a misspelling of Beerntsen’s first name (calling her ‘Peggy;’ her last name is often misspelled), yet nobody at Slate has noticed. What Leon Neyfakh fails to cover in his piece is better explained in Romper’s article, written by Jamie Kenney. I encourage you to read that to comprehend the courage and grace Mrs. Beerntsen possesses.
It’s also worth noting that Moira Demos and Laura Ricciardi, the creators of Making a Murderer, chose to include clips of local reporters interviewing the accused and reporting on the crime within the series. Calling the local press “window characters” in an interview with Jen Yamato for The Daily Beast, the filmmakers show the bias already present among the reporters, before the victim is found and the trial even takes place. And near the beginning of the series, reporters were shown constantly asking Steven Avery if he forgave Penny Beerntsen, as if she was the one who set out to frame him for her own sexual assault.
That complete disregard for the victims of these crimes is incredibly hard to take. I noticed it first within Serial and later, while watching Making A Murderer, and I just couldn’t watch any longer. Demos and Ricciardi have been called biased in their own reporting, which they deny, but I think they were careless in the representation of the female victims. It was most likely not intentional and came from a desire to portray Steven Avery, the show’s main subject, in the most empathetic way. Yet, by doing so, it ultimately creates a bias that is palpable, in my opinion.
The crimes explored within Serial and Making a Murderer are tragic and senseless, and their subsequent investigations and trials are equally frustrating. But there has to be a better way to examine this difficult topic without forgetting the women who lost their lives. They weren’t characters in poorly written crime dramas on broadcast television, but actual living people whose stories deserve to be told. Making a Murderer falls far short of this purpose and quickly lost me as a viewer for this reason.
Bronwen Dickey, in her piece for Slate, examines some of the other emotional issues at work within Making a Murderer. Kathryn Schulz, in a New Yorker piece out this week, carefully explores how the show gets it wrong. And recently, the New York Times Magazine featured a long-form article that goes behind the scenes of a special victims unit in Connecticut. It’s both insightful and respectfully written.
Sources:
From The Guardian: “Guilty Pleasure: How Making a Murderer Tapped Into Our Weakness for True Crime” by Chitra Ramaswamy.
From Ann Brocklehurst’s blog: “‘Injustice Porn’ like Serial and Making a Murderer celebrates men who kill and abuse women.”
From Slate: “What It Feels Like to Send an Innocent Person to Prison for 18 Years” by Leon Neyfakh.
From The Daily Beast: “How We Made Making a Murderer: Filmmakers Moira Demos and Laura Ricciardi Pull Back the Curtain” by Jen Yamato.
From Slate: “The Emotional Manipulations of Making a Murderer” by Bronwen Dickey.
From The New Yorker: “Dead Certainty: How Making a Murderer Goes Wrong” by Kathryn Schulz.
From The New York Times Magazine: “To Catch a Rapist” by Kathy Dobie.


(Drawing by Elizabeth Stilwell.)
Last week, I watched President Obama’s final State of the Union Address and felt comforted by his words. Things are tumultuous right now and sometimes it feels like the state of our nation hangs precariously in the hands of those who wish to crush it. The President mentioned Dr. King, and I wondered what he might think of the current state of things, where black men, women, and children must fear for their lives on a daily basis and Muslims are targeted by bigots hoping to become president soon. It’s a far cry from Dr. King’s dream for this country.
My boys have been learning about Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. at school, and last week, my older son mentioned that something very sad happened to him. I braced myself, wanting to protect them both from the reality of King’s assassination, but also realizing that, if my son knew enough to talk about this, then it was time to listen to him. He shared that Dr. King had been killed, and my younger son began to cry. I did my best to comfort them both, and my younger son asked why someone would hurt a good person. That’s such a complicated question without an easy answer, and I tried to explain that, often, when someone is loved and known for doing good, other people will try to hurt that person. It’s sad, and it happens too frequently. Both of my boys seemed to accept the answer, but I know we’ll have more conversations in the future.
I come back to President Obama’s words, because they seem like a call to action.
“What I’m asking for is hard. It’s easier to be cynical; to accept that change isn’t possible, and politics is hopeless, and to believe that our voices and actions don’t matter. But if we give up now, then we forsake a better future. Those with money and power will gain greater control over the decisions that could send a young soldier to war, or allow another economic disaster, or roll back the equal rights and voting rights that generations of Americans have fought, even died, to secure. As frustration grows, there will be voices urging us to fall back into tribes, to scapegoat fellow citizens who don’t look like us, or pray like us, or vote like we do, or share the same background.
We can’t afford to go down that path. It won’t deliver the economy we want, or the security we want, but most of all, it contradicts everything that makes us the envy of the world.
So, my fellow Americans, whatever you may believe, whether you prefer one party or no party, our collective future depends on your willingness to uphold your obligations as a citizen. To vote. To speak out. To stand up for others, especially the weak, especially the vulnerable, knowing that each of us is only here because somebody, somewhere, stood up for us. To stay active in our public life so it reflects the goodness and decency and optimism that I see in the American people every single day.
It won’t be easy. Our brand of democracy is hard. But I can promise that a year from now, when I no longer hold this office, I’ll be right there with you as a citizen — inspired by those voices of fairness and vision, of grit and good humor and kindness that have helped America travel so far. Voices that help us see ourselves not first and foremost as black or white or Asian or Latino, not as gay or straight, immigrant or native born; not as Democrats or Republicans, but as Americans first, bound by a common creed. Voices Dr. King believed would have the final word — voices of unarmed truth and unconditional love.“
I want to be a voice of unarmed truth and unconditional love, and I want to speak out more for the things I know to be true. I owe it to my boys to do my best to make the world a better place for them, and hopefully, to help make Dr. King’s dream a reality.
MLK Day posts by my fellow Ethical Writers Coalition members:
Video: Black History Tour of Washington, D.C. by Bianca Alexander.
On Speaking Out: MLK Day Reflection by Leah Wise.
The Radical Legacy of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. by Elizabeth Stilwell.


(Oils from Mullein & Sparrow.)
I have come to love essential oils, and I use them for many things every day. I’m also a fan of body oil and enjoy using it alongside lotion during the winter months. Over the holidays, I tried a few oils from Mullein & Sparrow, a Brooklyn-based, small-batch botanical store, and instantly fell in love.
Lemongrass and lavender are my two very favorite essential oils, and Mullein & Sparrow carries body oils made from each scent. The Lemongrass Mint Body Oil is a fresh citrus scent that is perfect for waking up on winter mornings. Lemongrass has a calming effect, and paired with mint, it’s a gorgeous fragrance that gently sinks into your skin as it moisturizes.
Mullein & Sparrow’s Lavender Blossom is also a lovely scent, and my bottle was a limited edition version filled with lavender flowers that is now sold out. The flowers add a romantic touch, but they make application a bit messy. I think I prefer the plain oil without any flowers added. Still, it’s a gorgeous fragrance that will carry me into the spring.
I also tried a small bottle of Immortelle & Myrrh Facial Serum, mostly out of curiosity. I don’t usually have much luck with facial oils, but I’ve been using a few drops with my morning moisturizer and it seems to be working well. A little goes a long way, so I’m not in danger of running out anytime soon. The company makes several facial oils and serums, and there’s one for every skin issue.
I’m really thrilled with these beautiful oils and I’m hoping to try more of Mullein & Sparrow’s products in the future.
